Pitch Feedback

Our pitch was very detailed and we knew what out aim of our music video was. We had things like our settings, costume, location and even characters. We also included the synergy of the artist and what we wanted to do. 

However we had a couple things missing for example the completed storyboard and the brand image and that is something we will have to add into out pitch. we also need to somehow move away from the artist we was inspired from (Jessie j)

We also needed to update out production schedule and also making our artist (KiKi Karmel) our original artist

We also needed to improve out synergy post, make them more creative and show the audience what will link for example the hair, the font and the whole look